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the The chart illustrates information about the percentage of purchasing and consuming coffee and tea for people in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia

the The chart illustrates information about the percentage of purchasing and consuming coffee and tea for people in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia 6lKWW
The chart illustrates information about the percentage of purchasing and consuming coffee and tea for people in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia. Overall, it is clear that the citizens went to a café for coffee and tea were the most common habit, except Adelaide. Additionally, The proportion of people buying instant coffee was higher than that of those purchasing fresh coffee in all cities. As can be seen from the chart, The percentage of people went to a café for coffee or tea in Sydney around 61% and the figure for Melbourne was roughly the same about 63%. While residents in Sydney and Melbourne had a similar habits buying instant coffee around 45% as well as the proportion of those bought fresh coffee in two cities were around 42% respectively in last 4 weeks. Moreover, The percentage of people bought fresh coffee in Hobart about 38% was higher than the proportion people bought fresh coffee in Britain and Adelaide at the same figures around 33%. The proportion of the people bought instant coffee in Hobart and Britain was roughly the same about 52% that higher than the figures of people bought instant coffee in Adelaide at 50%. Finally, The proportion of the people went to a café for coffee or tea in Hobart about 62% was higher than the percentage of people went to a café in Britain and Adelaide around 55% and 39% respectively.
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were the most common habit, except Adelaide.
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buying instant
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was higher than that of those purchasing
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in all cities.

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in Sydney
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61% and the figure for Melbourne was roughly the same about 63%. While residents in Sydney and Melbourne had a similar
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in Adelaide at 50%.
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in Hobart about 62% was higher than the
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IELTS academic the The chart illustrates information about the percentage of purchasing and consuming coffee and tea for people in last 4 weeks in five different cities in Australia

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