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The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020.

The chart below shows changes in the number of international students in Australia in 2019 and 2020. APrX3
The column chart illustrates the information on the change in the number of foreign students in Australia throughout 2 years, beginning from 2019. It can be clearly seen that the most international student came to Australia was China, while Malaysia had the lowest number of students coming to this country. Besides that, the number of Indian international students increased the most. To begin with, China students came to Australia for studying purposes the most in 182, 325 people, whereas the least number of international students studied in this country was Vietnam, Brazil and Malaysia, around 21 to under 23 thousand people in 2019. After a year, there was a slight decrease of Chinese students studying in Australia to 167, 568 people, while Vietnamese, Brazilian and Malaysian students remained unchanged in 2020. We can see that the second highest number of international students studying in Australia was India and the thirst rate was Nepal about 90 thousand and 46 thousand students. In 2020, the number of Indian students studying in this nation went up to 108, 049 which was double the figures of Nepal students, 50 thousand people.
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