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The graph information about Europe people choose different modes to use travel in 1950and 1990.

The graph information about Europe people choose different modes to use travel in 1950and 1990. 9aBJj
The bar charts give information about the choosing way of transportation by European people's in the year between 1950 and 1990. The data has been calibrated in percentage. Overall, it is vividly manifested that the less number of travelers love to travel by car at beginning year(1950) while, the plethora of people like to traveling by same mode at the end of year (1990). To begin with, in 1950, foot was the top of the list among the other ways of transport, it accounted for 40%. There was a drastic decrease observed in upcoming period namely, near 20% and 10%, respectively. Nonetheless, the number of bike used in Europe decline by one tenth percentage from 1950 to 1970. However, the lowest amount of individuals loves to traveling via bike in 1990. It comprised to near 10%. Moving towards, the bus was major source to transfer people in 1970, around 32%. In 1950 and 1990 followed, 20% and 15%, noticeably to. Nevertheless, selection of car compare to other roots was drastically increased throughout the span also the car was tops of the hits in 1990, approximately 65%.
The bar charts give information about the choosing way of transportation by European
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people
's in the year between 1950 and 1990. The data has
been calibrated
in percentage.
Overall
, it is
vividly
manifested that the less number of travelers
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to travel by car at beginning year(1950) while, the plethora of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
like to traveling by same mode at the
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end
of year (1990). To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with, in 1950, foot was the top of the list among the other ways of transport, it accounted for 40%. There was a drastic decrease observed in upcoming period
namely
, near 20% and 10%,
respectively
. Nonetheless, the number of bike
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used
in Europe decline by one tenth percentage from 1950 to 1970.
However
, the lowest amount of individuals
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loves
to traveling via bike in 1990. It comprised to near 10%. Moving towards, the bus was major source to transfer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in 1970, around 32%. In 1950 and 1990 followed, 20% and 15%,
noticeably
to.
Nevertheless
, selection of car compare to other roots was
drastically
increased throughout the span
also
the car was tops of the hits in 1990, approximately 65%.
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