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The graph illustrates the consuming of 3 spreads (margarine, low fat & reduced spreads, butter) from 1981 to 2007 in grams. Overall the consumption of butter was much higher than margarine in the eighties, while low & reduced spreads weren’t used entirely. In the nineties the butter usage was lower than margarine one and at the end of this decade low & reduced spreads started to be used. In the two-thousands the consumption of spreads in general was becoming lower than in the eighties and nineties, especially as for margarine. From 1981 to the end of the nineties only butter and margarine were used. The consumption of margarine in 1981 was lower than butter — about 90 and 140 grams respectively. In 1986 there was a slight dip in the usage of margarine to 80 grams, but the usage of butter was the highest (around 160 grams). From 1986 the consuming of margarine moderately increased and butter sharply decreased. In 1991 theystraightened. After that the consumption of butter gradually decreased down to 2007, when it was around 50 grams. After a short plateau period from 1991 to 1996 the margarine usage modestly decreased too, and in 2007 it was only 40 grams. Low fat & reduced spreads consumption started onty in 1996 and dramatically increased by 2001 with later moderately decrease to 70 grams in 2007. In 2007 this kind of spreads was used a bit more than butter and margarine — about 70, 50 and 40 grams respectively.
The graph illustrates the consuming of 3
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(margarine
,
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low
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
,
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butter)
from 1981 to 2007 in grams.

Overall
the
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consumption
of
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butter
was much higher than
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margarine
in the eighties, while
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low
&
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reduced
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spreads
weren’t
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used
entirely
. In the nineties the
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butter
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usage
was lower than
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margarine
one and at the
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end
of this decade
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low
&
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reduced
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spreads
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started
to be
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used
. In the two-thousands the
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consumption
of
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spreads
in general
was becoming lower than in the eighties and nineties,
especially
as for margarine.

From 1981 to the
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end
of the nineties
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only
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butter
and
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margarine
were
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used
. The
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consumption
of
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margarine
in 1981 was lower than
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butter
— about 90 and 140
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grams
respectively
. In 1986 there was a slight dip in the
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usage
of
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margarine
to 80
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grams
,
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but
the
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usage
of
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butter
was the highest (around 160
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grams)
. From 1986 the consuming of
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margarine
moderately
increased and
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butter
sharply
decreased. In 1991
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theystraightened
. After that the
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consumption
of
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butter
gradually
decreased down to 2007, when it was around 50
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grams
. After a short plateau period from 1991 to 1996 the
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margarine
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usage
modestly
decreased too, and in 2007 it was
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only
40
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grams
.
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Low
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fat
&
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reduced
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spreads
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consumption
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started
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onty
in 1996 and
dramatically
increased by 2001 with later
moderately
decrease to 70
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grams
in 2007. In 2007 this kind of
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spreads
was
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used
a bit more than
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butter
and
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margarine
— about 70, 50 and 40
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grams
respectively
.
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IELTS academic task 1 academic ielts graph

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
249 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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