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The tables show forecasted and actual sales of bicycle shop over four months.

The tables show forecasted and actual sales of bicycle shop over four months. O837
The tables illustrate the predicted and actual sales of a bicycle shop over four months(January, Febuary, March, and April) based on five categories(new bicycles, spare parts, clothing, repairs, and bicycle hires). Overall, the forecasted sales for all four months is slighly higher than the actual sales of bicycle shop. Meanwhile, one more parameter (bicycle hires) is added while calculating the actual sales. The shop has benefited from the sales of repairs, which shows a slight increase in the sales amount for all the four months($2, 590, $3, 420, $3, 550, $3, 780). On the contrary, the shop has least benefited from clothing sales as the actual sales figures($2, 350, $2, 100, $2, 680, $3, 220)are far less than forecasted sales figures($4, 500, $5, 100, $5, 400, $6, 000). The new bicycles and spare parts has an opposite story, the predicted sales for the all for months for new bicycle hires and spare parts has shown a slightly fluctuating trend. Finally, bicycle hires is an added component for calculating actual sales, where significant amount sales were only made in the month of March($850) and April($1100). However, there were no bicycle hires for the moth of January and Febuary.
The tables illustrate the predicted and
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actual
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sales
of a
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bicycle
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shop
over four months(January,
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Febuary
, March, and April) based on five categories(new
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bicycles
, spare parts, clothing, repairs, and
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bicycle
hires).

Overall
, the forecasted
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sales
for all four
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months
is
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slighly
higher than the
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actual
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sales
of
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bicycle
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shop
. Meanwhile, one more parameter
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(bicycle
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hires)
is
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added
while calculating the
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actual
sales.

The
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shop
has benefited from the
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sales
of repairs, which
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shows
a slight increase in the
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sales
amount for all the four
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months($2
, 590, $3, 420, $3, 550, $3, 780).
On the contrary
, the
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shop
has least benefited from clothing
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sales
as the
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actual
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sales
figures($2, 350, $2, 100, $2, 680, $3, 220)are far less than forecasted
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sales
figures($4, 500, $5, 100, $5, 400, $6, 000). The new
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bicycles
and spare parts has an opposite story, the predicted
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sales
for the all for
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months
for new
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bicycle
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hires
and spare parts has shown a
slightly
fluctuating trend.

Finally
,
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bicycle
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hires
is an
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added
component for calculating
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actual
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sales
, where significant amount
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sales
were
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only
made in the
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month
of March($850) and April($1100).
However
, there were no
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bicycle
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hires
for the moth of January and
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Febuary
.
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IELTS academic The tables show forecasted and actual sales of bicycle shop over four months.

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