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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. KwooL
The chart depicts the percentage of city resident's habit of buying and drinking coffee and tea in five major cities of Australia based on data of four weeks. Overall, Most of all city residents went to a cafe for coffee or tea except people in Adelalde where nearly equal number of residents either went to café or bought instant coffee. People who bought fresh coffee in last four weeks is minimal for all five Australian cities. Melbourne is comparatively more coffee or tea consuming city with high trend of going coffee shop for their coffee or tea. As in Melbourne, Numbers of resident outgoing for coffee in Sydney and Hobart is more than 60 percent. In these city, less than 45 percent of resident bought fresh coffee where habits of buying instant coffee is on average of 50 percent. For both Brisbane and Adelalde, there are nearly 34 percent of fresh coffee buyers which is lowest among other cities. Only in Adelalde, more people (50%) consume instant coffee than other ways of drinking coffees where slightly less people drink at coffee shop. On between 50 to 55 percent of Brisbane residents prefer to buy instant coffee which is about 2 percent lower than Hobart data.
The chart depicts the percentage of city resident's habit of buying and drinking
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in five major
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cities
of Australia based on data of four weeks.

Overall
, Most of all city
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residents
went to a
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except
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either went to café or
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instant
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.
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who
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bought
fresh
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in last four weeks is minimal for all five Australian cities.

Melbourne is
comparatively
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coffee
or
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consuming city with high trend of going
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shop for their
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or
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. As in Melbourne, Numbers of
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resident
outgoing for
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in Sydney and Hobart is more than 60
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. In these city, less than 45
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of
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resident
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where habits of buying instant
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is on average of 50 percent.

For both Brisbane and
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buyers which is lowest among other
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cities
.
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, more
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(50%) consume instant
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than other ways of drinking
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where
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drink at
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shop. On
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between 50 to 55
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of Brisbane
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prefer to
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instant
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which is about 2
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lower than Hobart data.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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