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The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain.The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods.

The chart Below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast food in Britain. The graphs shows the trends in consumptions of the fast foods. oRpRB

Above bar graph depicts how an individual person according to Income groups had spent pences per week to bought fast food. It can be clearly seen that the Hamburger was widely choice over a period of time by each group of people. To begin with Fish and Chips was most favourable for low income groups where as the Pizza was a list choice. Average income group preferred Hamburger first followed by the Fish and Chips. In contrast, for high earning people Hamburger was the top choice and second was Pizza. Coming to the line graph, which illustrate overall uses of the fast food in the grams over a period from 1970 to 1990. It's clear that the Hamburger and the pizza were widely consumed by Britain people. There was similar positive Trend till 1980 for both but after that Hamburger usage was drastically increased and resulted as a first choice. however there was a negative trend seen for Fish and Chips between 1970 to 1985. By 1990 it was average consumption was around 250 grams. . In conclusion all the group had spent good pance on hamburger and the pizza and average on fish and chips over 1970 to 1990

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