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the bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit abd vegetables per day in the uk from 2001 and 2008

the bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit abd vegetables per day in the uk from 2001 and 2008 AK01
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men, women and children who ate five servings of fruit and vegetables each day in 8 years, from 2001 and 2008 in the UK. Overall, it can be seen that the most highest percentage consuming was a women part, and the opposite That is, least of all who ate was a children part. Furthermore, in general the percentage of all people who ate these food items increased over the period given. The number of women who ate fruit and vegetables started from about 20% in 2001 and all the time was gradually increased to 35% in 2006, but the last two years was negligibly declined to about 30% in 2008. What about men and children percentage there was rate reminded relatively stable in the first three years(about 17% and 12%)and then was significantly increased to 27% in 2007, only in the last year the children and men part went down to 26% (men part) and to 25% (children part) in 2008.
The bar chart illustrates the
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five servings of fruit and vegetables each day in 8 years,
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from 2001 and 2008
in the UK.

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most highest
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consuming was a
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women
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, and the opposite

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was a
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of all
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these food items increased over the period
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The number of women
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fruit and vegetables
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started
from about 20% in 2001 and all the time was
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increased to 35% in 2006,
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the last two years was
negligibly
declined to about 30% in 2008.

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and
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there was rate reminded
relatively
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first
three years(about 17% and 12%)and then was
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increased to 27% in 2007,
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went down to 26% (
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men
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and to 25%
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(children
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in 2008.
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IELTS academic the bar chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit abd vegetables per day in the uk from 2001 and 2008

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