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The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010. pR663
The given column graph illustrates the amount of aid given by six developed countries from 2008 to 2010, measured in billions of dollars. The US provided the most aid in all three years and despite a slight drop in 2008 from 22 to 20 billion dollars in 2009, the figures rose to 25 billion dollars in 2010. Germany, UK and Japan, were other three major donors, with figures ranging between 10 to 15 billion dollars. It is interesting to note that Germany increased its aid continuously over the three years, but the aid from other two showed fluctuations. The aid from Netherlands and Sweden was under 10 billion dollars, yet the three years saw similar changes in the figures. Overall, the US contributed the most in supporting the developing world, whilst the aids of most countries fluctuated in three years, Germany was the only country with consistent increases.
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column graph illustrates the amount of
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aid
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by six
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developed countries
from 2008 to 2010, measured in
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of
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. The US provided the most
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aid
in all three years and despite a slight drop in 2008 from 22 to 20
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billion
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dollars
in 2009, the figures rose to 25
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billion
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in 2010. Germany, UK and Japan, were other three major donors, with figures ranging
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 10 and 15".
between 10 to 15
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billion
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. It is interesting to note that Germany increased its
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aid
continuously
over the three years,
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but
the
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aid
from other two
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showed
fluctuations. The
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aid
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from Netherlands
and Sweden was under 10
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billion
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,
yet
the three years
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saw
similar
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in the figures.
Overall
, the US contributed the most in supporting the developing world, whilst the
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aids
of most countries fluctuated in three years, Germany was the
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country with consistent increases.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the aid from six developed countries to developing countries from 2008 to 2010.

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