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The chart illustrate the percentage rate of housing price of three countries (Britain, Usa Australia) from 1998 to 2005. Overview, it’s clear from graph that Britain and Australia housing price rises in 2001 to 2004. moreover, they also they fall down in 2005. The Usa housing price remain constant at 1998 to 2003. To begin with, At the starting of 1998 the housing price of Britain was higher than other two countries like, 14%. The slowly fall down to 9% in 1999. However, they raises into 17% in 2001and 27% in 2003. although, they were diminished into 5% in 2005. The housing price of Usa remain constant below 10% from 1998to 2003. but, the housing price of Usa increased to above 10% from 2004 to2005. Then the Australia housing price was under 10% from 1998 to2001. After that, they were expanded to 17% at 2002 to2004. Finally, were diminished into 2% at 2005.
The chart
illustrate
the percentage rate of housing
price
of three countries (Britain,
Usa
Australia)

from
1998 to 2005.

Overview, it’s
clear
from graph that Britain and Australia housing
price
rises in 2001 to

2004.
moreover
, they
also
they fall down in 2005. The
Usa
housing
price
remain constant at 1998
to


2003.

To
begin
with, At the starting of 1998 the housing
price
of Britain was higher than other two

countries
like, 14%. The
slowly
fall down to 9% in 1999.
However
, they
raises
into 17% in 2001and

27% in 2003.
although
, they
were diminished
into 5% in 2005. The housing
price
of
Usa
remain


constant
below 10% from 1998to 2003.
but
, the housing
price
of
Usa
increased to above 10% from

2004 to2005.

Then the Australia housing
price
was under 10% from 1998 to2001. After that, they
were expanded
to 17% at 2002 to2004.
Finally
,
were diminished
into 2% at 2005.
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