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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. n66p7
The chart demonstrates the the level of temperatures and hours of daytime in the two country London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. It can be seen that the temperatures in a week in London are much lower than the temperatures in Sydney. Meanwhile, Australia experienced the longer hours that the sun shines compared to London. In London, the weather was generally getting cold since the average temperature was about 16oC with the highest temperature reaches its peaks at 13oC and 3oC as the lowest temperature. Overall, the daylight hours in the weekend of December 2018 only last approximately 7 hours per day. In contrast, the weather in Sydney experienced the notably difference from UK's when it becomes warmer day after day with the highest and the lowest temperatures was 31oC and 17oC respectively. Compared to London, Sydney's hours of daylight are almost double with the average number were about 15 hours per day.
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of daytime in the two country London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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that the
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temperatures
in a week in London are much lower than the
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in Sydney. Meanwhile, Australia experienced the longer
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that the sun shines compared to London.

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since the average
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temperature
was about 16oC with the highest
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reaches its peaks at 13oC and 3oC as the lowest
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.
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, the daylight
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in the weekend of December 2018
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last approximately 7
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hours
per day.

In contrast
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when it becomes warmer day after day with the highest and the lowest
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temperatures
was 31oC and 17oC
respectively
. Compared to London, Sydney's
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hours
of daylight are almost double with the average number were about 15
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IELTS academic The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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