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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

There are two tables, one depicts the temperatures and day light hours of London, while other illustrate the same phenomenon in sydney, in three consecutive days in the month of December 2018. Overall, the duration of the sunrise was quite earlier in sydney, however, the timing of sunset was significantly delayed as compared to London. Additionally, temperature of the city London was lower than Sydney. On Friday 28th, December the temperature was 9 degree celcius in London, whereas, it was 26 degree celcius in Sydney. Then the temperature steadily rose in the both countries in subsequence days. However, there were some little fluctuation in temperature could be noticed. Furthermore, sunrise timing of London was 8. 05 am, while, in Sydney it was almost 2. 5 hours earlier than London. On the contrary, sunset timing on the London was 15. 57 pm and it almost 4 hours earlier than Sydney. Morever, there were some minute variation in timing of sunrise and sunset was present with the passage of the day.
There are two tables, one depicts the
temperatures
and
day light
hours of London, while other illustrate the same phenomenon in
sydney
, in three consecutive days in the month of December 2018.

Overall
, the duration of the sunrise was quite earlier in
sydney
,
however
, the
timing
of sunset was
significantly
delayed as compared to London.
Additionally
,
temperature
of the city London was lower than Sydney.

On Friday 28th, December the
temperature
was 9 degree
celcius
in London, whereas, it was 26 degree
celcius
in Sydney. Then the
temperature
steadily
rose in the both countries in subsequence days.
However
, there were
some
little
fluctuation in
temperature
could
be noticed
.

Furthermore
, sunrise
timing
of London was 8. 05 am, while, in Sydney it was almost 2. 5 hours earlier than London.
On the contrary
, sunset
timing
on the London was 15. 57 pm and it almost 4 hours earlier than Sydney.
Morever
, there were
some
minute variation in
timing
of sunrise and sunset was present with the passage of the day.
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IELTS academic The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

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  American English
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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