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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the evolution of tools used for cutting in the Stone age era. Overall, a comparison between two tools has been made and they are classified as tool A and tool B respectively, whereas the first one was made 1. 4 million years ago and the latter was made 0. 8 million years ago. Both the tools were of similar lenghts. In tool A measured about 5 cms tall with the front view was triangle in shape and similar was the case with back view. As time evolved there was no difference in the lenght of the tool but the view changed to being round in shape. The only difference which can be spotted between the tools is that of the side view where the width was narrowed down as years passed.
The diagram illustrates the evolution of
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tools
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used
for cutting in the
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Stone age
era.

Overall
, a comparison between two
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tools
has been
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made and
they
are classified
as
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tool
A and
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tool
B
respectively
, whereas the
first
one
was made
1. 4 million years ago and the latter
was made
0. 8 million years ago. Both the
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tools
were of similar
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lenghts
.

In
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tool
A measured about 5
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cms tall
with the front
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view
was triangle in shape and similar was the case with back
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view
. As time evolved there was no difference in the
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lenght
of the
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tool
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but
the
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view
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changed
to being
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round in shape
.

The
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only
difference which can
be spotted
between the
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tools
is that of the side
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view
where the width
was narrowed
down as years passed.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age.

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134 words
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