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The diagram below shows the development of cutting tools in the Stone Age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the evolution of tools used for cutting in the Stone age era. Overall, a comparison between two tools has been made and they are classified as tool A and tool B respectively, whereas the first one was made 1. 4 million years ago and the latter was made 0. 8 million years ago. Both the tools were of similar lenghts. In tool A measured about 5 cms tall with the front view was triangle in shape and similar was the case with back view. As time evolved there was no difference in the lenght of the tool but the view changed to being round in shape. The only difference which can be spotted between the tools is that of the side view where the width was narrowed down as years passed.

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tools
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for cutting in the If the term is a proper noun, use initial capitals.Stone Age
Stone age
 era.

Overall
, a comparison between two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusmeansutensilweaponappliance
tools
 has been Use a comma before ‘and’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).made, and
made and
 they are classified
 as You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusmeansutensilweaponappliance
tool
 A and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusmeansutensilweaponappliance
tool
 B respectively
, whereas the first
 one was made
 1. 4 million years ago and the latter was made
 0. 8 million years ago. Both the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusmeansutensilweaponappliance
tools
 were of similar Possible spelling mistake found.lengths
lenghts
.

In You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusmeansutensilweaponappliance
tool
 A measured about 5 Possible spelling mistake found.cm stallCMS tallcm tallCDs tallCSS tallCNS tall
cms tall
 with the front You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectpictureoutlooksightglimpsescene
view
 was triangle in shape and similar was the case with back You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectpictureoutlooksightglimpsescene
view
. As time evolved there was no difference in the Possible spelling mistake found.length
lenght
 of the Use a comma before ‘but’ if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).tool,
tool
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectpictureoutlooksightglimpsescene
view
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 to being A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.round
round in shape
.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 difference which can be spotted
 between the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withengineapparatusmeansutensilweaponappliance
tools
 is that of the side You use this word too often, consider replacing it withprospectpictureoutlooksightglimpsescene
view
 where the width was narrowed
 down as years passed. 