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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The first diagram illustrates the process of wave energy generating machine, and the second diagram shows location of energy generators and their output. we can see that electricity is generated using two turbine and one electricity generator, and that energy generating process consist of two chambers stages for waves air flow and atmospheric air flow. At the first stage in the production of wave energy water's airflow only get intact in second chamber. Next, chamber wave's airflow speed rotate turbine and at that time atmospheric air flow also take's part and both airflows together rotate the turbine. The Shaft of turbine is connected with rotar of energy generator. Shaft connection with rotar generate rotating motion and help electricity generator to achive energy output. Energy generator machine has two location option. First location is for small waves wich gives small output though installation cost is low. Second spot is for large waves wich is able to archive high output and installation cost is low as compare to first location.
The
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first
diagram illustrates the process of
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wave
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energy
generating machine, and the second diagram
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shows
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location
of
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energy
generators and their
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output
.
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we
can
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see
that electricity
is generated
using two
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turbine
and one electricity generator, and that
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energy
generating process consist of two chambers stages for
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waves
air flow and atmospheric air flow. At the
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first
stage in the production of
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wave
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energy
water's airflow
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only
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get
intact in second chamber.
Next
, chamber wave's airflow speed rotate
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turbine
and at that time atmospheric air flow
also
take's part and both
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airflows
together rotate the
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turbine
. The Shaft of
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turbine
is connected
with
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rotar
of
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energy
generator. Shaft connection with
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rotar
generate rotating motion and
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help
electricity generator to
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achive
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energy
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output
.
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Energy
generator machine has two
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location
option.
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First
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location
is for
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small
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waves
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wich
gives
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small
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output
though installation cost is low. Second spot is for large
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waves
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wich
is able to archive high
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output
and installation cost is low as compare to
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first
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location
.
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IELTS academic The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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