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The chart shows the process of getting a driving license

The chart illustrates how a driving license could be received through two stages from doing paper work to taking written and driving tests. In the first stage, a candidate is required to visit license center where they are expected to fill in an application form before which they must pass eye test. The application will be rejected if a candidate fails the eye test, otherwise, they will be allowed to go on. Once a test taker has paid required fee, they will then be granted to participate in a test. In the exam, a candidate is tested both mentally and verbally. Individuals are allowed to attempt up to three times in the written test unless they finish it successfully. Those who pass the former test is enabled to take a driving test where successful candidates are provided with a driving license. However, people who fail either test will have to repay the fee in order to start the procedure anew. Clearly, it would cost a candidate extra money unless they pass it in their first attempt.
The chart illustrates how a
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driving
license could
be received
through two stages from doing paper work to taking written and
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driving
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tests
.

In the
first
stage, a
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candidate
is required
to visit license center where they are
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expected
to fill in an application form
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before
which they
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must
pass eye
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test
. The application will
be rejected
if a
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candidate
fails the eye
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test
,
otherwise
, they will be
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allowed
to go on.

Once a
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test
taker has paid required fee, they will then
be granted
to participate in a
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test
. In the exam, a
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candidate
is
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tested
both mentally and
verbally
. Individuals are
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allowed
to attempt up to three times in the written
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test
unless they finish it
successfully
. Those who pass the former
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test
is enabled
to take a
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driving
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test
where successful
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candidates
are provided
with a
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driving
license.
However
,
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people
who fail either
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test
will
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have to
repay the fee in order to
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start
the procedure anew.

Clearly
, it would cost a
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candidate
extra money unless they pass it in their
first
attempt.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the process of getting a driving license

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
176 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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