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The table shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

The table chart illustrates the fair is organised by four different shops on the provided time in weekdayPastries has the highest price in the time period 7: 30to10: 30. Coffee sale is 10% less than pastries. After that 60% difference is suspected between the rate of tea and sandwich, which is 110% and 50%. During the 10: 30 to 2: 30 the sale rate of coffee, pastries, tea which is depicted less than eccept sandwiches in the first time period. There has been seen difference in the sale of sandwich, which is more in the last time period. 70% is decreased at 2: 30 to 5: 30. Overall, coffee has the greatest sale in the first and last time period as comparison to other time period.
The table chart illustrates the
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weekdayPastries
has the highest price in the
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7: 30to10: 30. Coffee
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sale
is 10% less than pastries. After that 60% difference
is suspected
between the rate of tea and sandwich, which is 110% and 50%. During the 10: 30 to 2: 30 the
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sale
rate of coffee, pastries, tea which
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. There has been
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seen
difference in the
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of sandwich, which is more in the last
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. 70%
is decreased
at 2: 30 to 5: 30.
Overall
, coffee has the greatest
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sale
in the
first
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IELTS academic The table shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

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1 paragraphs
126 words
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