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The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

The life cycle depicts the information about different phases involved in the silk moth while the process chart illustrates how silk both produces silk cloth. Taking a general overview, the life cycle of the silkworm and production of silk cloth, cocoon is necessary. It can be clearly seen that in life cycle of the silkworm in first phase, the cycle begins with the eggs, which are produced by the moth. In second phase after 10 days, they become silkworm larva who feed on mulberry leaf within 4-6 weeks. In third phase, larva produces silk thread which converts into cocoon in 3-8 days. In the last phase, it takes 16 days to become a moth. Turning to the flow chart of silk cloth production in cocoon is the raw materials. Once it is selected, it is boiled in the water, subsequently, the boiled cocoon is sent for unwinding phase, twisting it into thread to make thread of 300-900m. After this twisting thread is ready for dryer and it gets converted the into cloth in wearing stage.
The life
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cycle
depicts the information about
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different
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phases
involved in the
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silk
moth while the process chart illustrates how
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silk
both produces
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silk
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cloth
. Taking a general overview, the life
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cycle
of the silkworm and production of
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silk
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cloth
,
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cocoon
is necessary. It can be
clearly
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seen
that in life
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cycle
of the silkworm in
first
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phase
, the
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cycle
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begins
with the eggs, which
are produced
by the moth. In second
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phase
after 10 days, they become silkworm larva who feed on mulberry leaf within 4-6 weeks. In third
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phase
, larva produces
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silk
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thread
which converts into
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cocoon
in 3-8 days.
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In
the last
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phase
, it takes 16 days to become a moth. Turning to the flow chart of
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silk
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cloth
production in
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cocoon
is the raw materials. Once it
is selected
, it
is boiled
in the water,
subsequently
, the boiled
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cocoon
is
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sent
for unwinding
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phase
, twisting it into
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thread
to
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make
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thread
of 300
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-900m
. After this twisting
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thread
is ready for
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dryer and
it
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converted the into
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cloth
in wearing stage.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.

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