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The tables draw the information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Denmark, and Sweden.

The tables draw the information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Denmark, and Sweden. RVAak
The tables draw the information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Denmark, and Sweden. Overall, while sales of bananas increased gradually in the UK, Switzerland, and Belgium, and decreased slightly in Sweden and Denmark, coffee sales showed a climb in all five countries. Looking at the tables in detail, the sales of coffee in the UK experienced a dramatic increase from 1. 5 to 200 million euros, whereas in Denmark, Sweden, and Belgium only there was a slight rise. In Switzerland, coffee sales in 2004 were double that of in 1999. The sales of bananas on the other hand, in Switzerland, made nearly a threefold jump from 15 to 47 in 1999 and 2004 respectively. While banana sales in the UK and Belgium climbed steeply, they fell slightly in Sweden and Denmark from 1. 8 to 1 and 2 to 0. 9 respectively.
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Fairtrade-labelled
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and banana in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Denmark, and Sweden.

Overall
, while
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of bananas increased
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in the UK, Switzerland, and Belgium, and decreased
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in Sweden and Denmark,
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coffee
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a climb in all five countries.

Looking at the tables in detail, the
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of
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coffee
in the UK experienced a dramatic increase from 1. 5 to 200 million euros, whereas in Denmark, Sweden, and Belgium
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there was a slight rise. In Switzerland,
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coffee
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in 2004 were double that of in 1999.

The
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of bananas
on the other hand
, in Switzerland, made
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a threefold jump from 15 to 47 in 1999 and 2004
respectively
. While banana
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in the UK and Belgium climbed
steeply
, they fell
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in Sweden and Denmark from 1. 8 to 1 and 2 to 0. 9
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The tables draw the information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in the UK, Switzerland, Belgium, Denmark, and Sweden.

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