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The map below shows three potential sites for a leisure centre. Summarise the information and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows three potential sites for a leisure centre. KyAOL
The given map illustrate the three potential locations for the development of liesure centre. It can easily be depicted that all three proposed sites presents entirely diffrent scenario. The site A is located near the industrial area, just north of the river. Although the site is not that far from the residential area and the river offers a good view, the industiral air pollutants will adversely affect the health of people visiting the centre. On the contrary, the site B enjoys more prefreble location as it is located near the residential area, making it more accessible for the general population. Moreover, the site lies just at the bottom of the hill and the river runs in the south west of the location, thus providing a more aesthatic view for the liesure centre. Alternatively, the proposed site C is located on the top of the hill, partially surrounded by a thick layer of forest. This site appears to be the best choice for the people that loves green environment and prefer to spent thier holidays away from the town hustle. To recapitulate, all three locations have thier own advantages and thus needs to be evaluated based on the resident’s prefrences.
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locations
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centre
. It can
easily
be depicted
that all three proposed
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sites
presents
entirely
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diffrent
scenario.

The
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A
is located
near the industrial area,
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just
north of the river. Although the
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site
is not that far from the residential area and the river offers a
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good
view, the
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industiral
air pollutants will
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affect the health of
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people
visiting the
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centre
.

On the contrary
, the
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site
B enjoys more
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prefreble
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location
as it
is located
near the residential area, making it more accessible for the general population.
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, the
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site
lies
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just
at the bottom of the hill and the river runs in the
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south west
of the
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,
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providing a more
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aesthatic
view for the
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centre
.

Alternatively
, the proposed
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C
is located
on the top of the hill,
partially
surrounded by a thick layer of forest. This
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site
appears to be the best choice for the
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people
that
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loves
green environment and prefer to spent
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thier
holidays away from the town hustle.

To recapitulate, all three
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have
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thier
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advantages and
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prefrences
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IELTS academic The map below shows three potential sites for a leisure centre.

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