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NUMBER OF TOURISTS VISITING A CARIBEAN ISLAND (2010-2017)

NUMBER OF TOURISTS VISITING A CARIBEAN ISLAND (2010-2017) VYAm3

The line graph illustrates the number of travelers visiting Caribean Island according to two groups of their accommodation over the course of seven years, commencing in 2010. Overall, the total data of tourists, who travelled to the island climbed considerably. That increase was observed by both groups, which are visitors staying on cruise ships and on land. Despite some fluctuations during the time, the former figure surpassed the latter’s one by the end of the period. Regarding the proportion of tourists on cruise ships, it started at one-third a million in 2010. However, the former data increased over the latter in 2016 and proceed to 2 million in 2017, about eight times as before. Turning to the remaining group, the number of travelers staying on land stable at 0, 5 million until it started rose moderately by three-fourth a million by 2013, before a decline of half a million and rejoined to 2 million in 2017.

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