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The tables compare the amount of money of selling coffee and bananas, in two separate years, in five difference EU nations. v.2

The tables compare the amount of money of selling coffee and bananas, in two separate years, in five difference EU nations. v. 2
The tables compare the amount of money of selling coffee and bananas, in two separate years, in five difference EU nations. Overall, the sales of coffee in all countries rose over the periods while the sales of bananas went up only in three out of five nations. The UK saw the highest points for selling two products. The revenue from selling coffee dramatically increased, in the UK, from $1. 5 (1999) to reach a peak of $20 million (2004). During this time, sales of this product rose double, in Switzerland, from $3 million (1999). Although this figure also slightly climbed, in Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden, the sales of coffee of these countries remain below $2 million in both years Sales of bananas rose considerably, in the UK, from $15 (1999) to the highest point of $47 million (2004). The number of selling this product also rapidly increased, in Switzerland and Denmark, from $1 and $0, 6 million (1999) to $5, 5 and $4 million (2004), respectively. By contrast, this figure, in the two remain nations, decreased to around $1 million (2004).
The tables compare the amount of money of
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coffee
and bananas, in two separate years, in five difference EU nations.

Overall
, the
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sales
of
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coffee
in all countries rose over the periods while the
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of bananas went up
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in three out of five nations. The UK
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the highest points for
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two products.

The revenue from
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coffee
dramatically
increased, in the UK, from $1. 5 (1999) to reach a peak of $20
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million
(2004). During this time,
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sales
of this product rose double, in Switzerland, from $3
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million
(1999). Although this figure
also
slightly
climbed, in Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden, the
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sales
of
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coffee
of these countries remain below $2
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million
in both
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years


Sales of bananas rose
considerably
, in the UK, from $15 (1999) to the highest point of $47
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million
(2004). The number of
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this product
also
rapidly
increased, in Switzerland and Denmark, from $1 and $0, 6
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(1999) to $5, 5 and $4
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million
(2004),
respectively
. By contrast, this figure, in the two remain nations, decreased to around $1
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IELTS academic The tables compare the amount of money of selling coffee and bananas, in two separate years, in five difference EU nations. v. 2

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