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The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant v.2

The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of people holding science qualifications in Malaysia and Singapore. Overall, as can be seen, people who hold no science qualifications account for the largest rate in both countries. Another visible trend is that people who have master’s degree have an equal percentage in two nations. In terms of a significantly low proportion, the students holding master level in science in both Malaysia and Singapore account for approximately 4%. Likewise, the percentage of people hold Bachelor’s degree in Malaysia is about 10% in science. The figure for Singapore is higher, at around 20%. By contrast, in Malaysia, the rate of people who hold the science qualifications with school leaving exams is slightly higher compared to Singapore, at almost 36% and 30% respectively. The figure for people holding no science qualifications at all in Malaysia is under 65%, whereas the number in Singapore is about 5% lower.
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in Malaysia and Singapore.

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account for the largest rate in both countries. Another visible trend is that
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who have master’s degree have an equal percentage in two nations.

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in both Malaysia and Singapore account for approximately 4%.
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hold Bachelor’s degree in Malaysia is about 10% in
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. The figure for Singapore is higher, at around 20%.

By contrast, in Malaysia, the rate of
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who hold the
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higher compared to Singapore, at almost 36% and 30%
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. The figure for
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at all in Malaysia is under 65%, whereas the number in Singapore is about 5% lower.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries

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4 paragraphs
151 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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