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The Tables below show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people(club members and the general public) who showed their opinions about a new theater. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparison where relevant.

The Tables below show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people(club members and the general public) who showed their opinions about a new theater. ag5Y
• The given table encapsulate the opinions about a new auditorium given by two different variety of people that is club member and the general public. • The response given by club members and the general public about the production quality is excellence and rated nearly 70% by both the groups. 17% and 18% people of club members and general public respectively were rated it as satisfactory and almost similar numbers (13% and 15%) rated as poor. • Moving further to the information about the plays and performances to the public, majority numbers of people from club members and general public rated as excellent (72% and 88% respectively), whereas the few people of each group (5% and 2%) rated as poor. Nearly a quarter of club members and 10% of general publics rated as satisfactory. • The positive rating were given by the club members about the facilities in the theater. Three quarter and almost a quarter were rated as excellent and satisfactory respectively by club members, whereas only 2% were rated poor. Half of general public were rated excellent for the facilities provided in theater and roughly a quarter rated as poor. 19% of general public were rated as satisfactory. • Overall, the opinion given by two groups abouts the theaters were excellent.
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IELTS academic The Tables below show response to a questionnaire given by two groups of people(club members and the general public) who showed their opinions about a new theater.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
214 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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