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The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007.

The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. 76d5

The line graph provides the data on number of university graduate in a certain university of Canada during late 1992s to 2007 AD. Overall, the standard of female graduates were always higher as compared to that of male and the number of female kept on increasing through out the period while there was slightly a little fluctuation in terms of male graduates. At the starting point, during 1992 there was only around 70000 scholars in Canada, however the ratio kept on climbing up till 1996 where it was around 87000 afterwards the number of men drop down in a small ratio in 1998. Yet it established itself and went on incrementing till the end and as per research it had went up by 1. 4%. On the other hand the number of women were higher since the start and it kept on growing gradually. In 1998 just after two years of analysis it had grew by 5000 students. In spite of that it fell down a little in 1998 but after onwards it gradually increased till the end of the bout. As per the presentation it was discovered that the percentage had went up by almost 3. 2% as to the starting point.

The line graph provides the data on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of university graduate in a certain university of Canada during late 1992s to 2007 AD.

Overall
, the standard of female graduates were always higher Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 compared to that of male and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of female This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 on increasing Did you mean "throughout"?throughout
through out
 the period while there was slightly
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 fluctuation in terms of male graduates.

At the starting point, during 1992 there was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 around 70000 scholars in Canada, however
 the ratio This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 on climbing up till 1996 where it was around 87000 afterwards the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
This phrase is redundant. Consider using "drop".drop
drop down
 in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 ratio in 1998. Yet
 it established itself and went on incrementing till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 and as per research it had Use past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 up by 1. 4%.

On the other hand
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of women were higher since the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 and it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 on growing gradually
. In 1998 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 after two years of analysis it had Use past participle here: "grown".grown
grew
 by 5000 students. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
In spite of
 that it fell down a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 in 1998 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 after onwards it gradually
 increased till the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the bout. “As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 per the presentation it was discovered
 that the percentage had Use past participle here: "gone".gone
went
 up by almost 3. 2% as to the starting point. 