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The chart shows components of gdp in the uk from 1992 to 2000.

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The given bar graph illustrates the graph Gross Domestic Product from IT and Service industry in the United kingdom between 1992 and 2000. The data was calibrated in terms of percentage. Overall, the percentage of GDP from IT industry increased over the time period, while it upsurged in case of Service center between 1992 and 2000. Turning into details, in 1992, 6% of Gross Domestic Product contributed from IT industry, although it inclined to less than one -tenth in 1994 and 1996. Similarly, while the contribution of GDP from IT industry was 12% in 1998, it grew by 4 % after 2 years. Similarly, in 1992, 4% of GDP was granted from Service industry and it reached to around 6% in 1994 and 1996 Likewise, it was observed approximately below one-tenth from IT and Service industry in 1998 and 2000 respectively.
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between 1992 and 2000. The data
was calibrated
in terms of percentage.
Overall
, the percentage of GDP from IT
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industry
increased over the time period, while it upsurged in case of
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Service
center between 1992 and 2000. Turning into
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details
, in 1992, 6% of Gross Domestic Product contributed from IT
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industry
, although it inclined to less than one -tenth in 1994 and 1996.
Similarly
, while the contribution of GDP from IT
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industry
was 12% in 1998, it grew by 4 % after 2 years.
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, in 1992, 4% of GDP
was granted
from
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Service
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industry
and it reached to around 6% in 1994 and 1996
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, it
was observed
approximately below one-tenth from IT and
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Service
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industry
in 1998 and 2000
respectively
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