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The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990

The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990 j3xp

The bar charts illustrate the way Developing and Industrialized countries participated in education and science in the year 1980 and 1990. Overall average number of schooling years and the number of scientist and technicians was increased in developing and industrialized countries, whereas the expenditure on research and development was decreased in Developing countries and while increased in Industrialized countries over a given period of time. As the bar chart shows there was rise in average number of schooling years in both countries. In 1980 number was rise

The bar charts illustrate the way Developing and Industrialized You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 participated in education and science in the year 1980 and 1990.

Overall
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number
 of schooling years and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of scientist and technicians was increased
 in developing and industrialized You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
, whereas the expenditure on research and development was decreased
 in Developing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 and while increased in Industrialized You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
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given
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As
 the bar chart This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 there was rise in average You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
 of schooling years in both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
. In 1980 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsumtotalfigurestatistic
number
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