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The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010.

The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010. mMk1
the given poly line graph provides the information about usage of public transport as well as private cars in various cities of Australia between 2000 to 2010. the data has been calibrated in percentage. overall, it can be witnessed that in sydney the usage of public transportation was equal from 2000 to 2010 along with Adelaide, but it seemed like it had been opposite in case of using the private vehicles.
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line graph provides the information about usage of public transport
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as private cars in various cities of Australia
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the usage of public transportation was equal from 2000 to 2010 along with Adelaide,
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it seemed like it had been opposite in case of using the private vehicles.

IELTS academic The line graphs show the percentage of people using public transport and people using private cars in five cities of Australia from 2000 to 2010.

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