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The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer. qWKD
The diagram illustrates how natural gas is manufactured and distributed towards different consumers. It shows that natural gas goes through various steps in the proccess. Ultimately, the gas is then distributed and supplied to gas appliances and cars. Firstly, gas is excavated and collected from gas wells. Next, it is sent to proccessing stations to be rid of any impurities. Then, the proccessed gas are transported and distributed to either gas supply stations or gas stations. It is to be noted that gas supply stations are to transfer gas in a regulated pattern towards domestic and industrial consumers commonly through a subscription. In contrast, gas stations sell fuel and lubricants for ground vehicles. Therefore, gas stations will sell the proccessed gas in the form of liquid petroleum as a fuel for automobiles. While gas supply stations further distributes and supply gas to gas appliances through non-piped gas tanks or underground pipeline networks for domestic uses. Overall, natural gas is collected from gas wells, transported to large companies or distributors. Then it is to be sold or supplied to consumers that require fuel for needs such as ground vehicles or daily appliances.
The diagram illustrates how natural
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gas
is manufactured
and distributed towards
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different
consumers. It
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shows
that natural
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gas
goes through various steps in the
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proccess
.
Ultimately
, the
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gas
is then distributed and supplied to
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gas
appliances and cars.

Firstly
,
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gas
is excavated
and collected from
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gas
wells.
Next
, it is
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sent
to
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proccessing
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stations
to
be rid
of any impurities. Then, the
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proccessed
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gas
are transported
and distributed to either
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gas
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supply
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stations
or
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gas
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stations
. It is to
be noted
that
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gas
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supply
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stations
are to transfer
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gas
in a regulated pattern towards domestic and industrial consumers
commonly
through a subscription.
In contrast
,
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gas
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stations
sell fuel and lubricants for ground vehicles.
Therefore
,
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gas
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stations
will sell the
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proccessed
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gas
in the form of liquid petroleum as a fuel for automobiles. While
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gas
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supply
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stations
further
distributes and
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supply
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gas
to
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gas
appliances through non-piped
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gas
tanks or underground pipeline networks for domestic
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uses
.

Overall
, natural
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gas
is collected
from
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gas
wells, transported to large
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companies
or distributors. Then it is to
be sold
or supplied to consumers that require fuel for needs such as ground vehicles or daily appliances.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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6.0
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