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The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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The diagram illustrates the process of producing and transporting natural gas to consumer. Overall, the process contains of 5 diffent steps, when it's dug up, processed, tranported, store and used. The result of the process is used as fuel for transportation or power for gas appolances. Firstly, the gas is produce from the gas well, then makes it way to the processing station where it is converted to gasoline that we use. After finished, it is tranport to where it will be store, the are 2 destination which the gas is transit to, gas stations and gas supply stations. After stored, gas stations produce fuel for vehical. Meanwhile, gas that was store in supply stations is used to produce non-pipped gas tanks or go into the pipeline network. This kind of gas in mainly used for powering gas appilances of local citizen household.
The diagram illustrates the process of producing and transporting natural
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gas
to consumer.

Overall
, the process contains of 5
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diffent
steps, when it's dug up, processed,
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tranported
, store and
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used
. The result of the process is
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used
as fuel for transportation or power for
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gas
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appolances
.

Firstly
, the
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gas
is produce from the
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gas
well, then
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makes
it way to the processing
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station
where it
is converted
to gasoline that we
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use
. After finished, it is
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tranport
to where it will be store,
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2
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destination
which the
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is transit to,
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gas
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stations
and
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supply stations.

After stored,
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gas
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stations
produce fuel for
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vehical
. Meanwhile,
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gas
that was store in supply
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stations
is
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used
to produce non-pipped
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gas
tanks or go into the pipeline network. This kind of
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gas
in
mainly
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used
for powering
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gas
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appilances
of local citizen household.

IELTS academic The diagram shows the way in which natural gas is produced and transported to the consumer.

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4 paragraphs
143 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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