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The tables below shoe predicted and actual immigration figures for the UK for the years 1984-2000.

The tables below shoe predicted and actual immigration figures for the UK for the years 1984-2000. jbDoy
The figures in the table illustrates the real and assumed number of migrants for the UK from the years 1984 till 2000 in thousands. The first table displays the predicted number of UK migrants from 1984 to 2000. Most of the immigration, around 150 thousand, would happen in the year 2000. Whereas, the lowest number would be on the year 1984 (about 38 thousand). The numbers would be remained same within 35-50 thousand for the initial 5 years and after that, the numbers would be ranging from 80-100 thousand for the next seven years (1989-1995). It also predicted that the number of people migrating to UK would increase up-to 148 thousand by the year 2000. On the second table, it shows the actual migrants of UK from the year 1984 till 2000. The figure depicts that highest migration happened during the year 2000 and lowest in 1984. The numbers were comparatively higher than the predicted ones. For the first five years, the total immigrants were 58, 60, 40, 43 and 73 respectively. The range, however, remained between 60-100 thousand for the next seven years. It also portrays that the data was above 100 thousand for the rest of the study period. To sum up, most of the actual immigration figures are higher than the predicted immigration figures
The
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in the table illustrates the real and assumed
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number
of migrants for the UK from the years 1984 till 2000 in thousands.

The
first
table displays the
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predicted
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of UK migrants from 1984 to 2000. Most of the immigration, around 150 thousand, would happen in the
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year
2000.
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, the lowest
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would be on the
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year
1984 (about 38 thousand). The
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would
be remained
same within 35-50 thousand for the initial 5 years and after that, the
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would be ranging from 80-100 thousand for the
next
seven years (1989-1995). It
also
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predicted
that the
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number
of
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migrating to UK would increase up-to 148 thousand by the
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year
2000.

On the second table, it
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the actual migrants of UK from the
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1984 till 2000. The
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depicts that highest migration happened during the
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year
2000 and lowest in 1984. The
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were
comparatively
higher than the
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predicted
ones. For the
first
five years, the total immigrants were 58, 60, 40, 43 and 73
respectively
. The range,
however
, remained between 60-100 thousand for the
next
seven years. It
also
portrays that the data was above 100 thousand for the rest of the study period.

To sum up, most of the actual immigration
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are higher than the
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predicted
immigration
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