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The graph shows the number of tourists who visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

The graph shows the number of tourists who visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Jq356
The graph illustrates the number of tourists who visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017. Overall, it is noticeable that the total number of tourists who visited the Caribbean island increased over the period of time, those who lived on the crusie ships in particular surpassed those who resided on the island. In 2010, the visitors who lived on the cruse ships stood at 0. 3 million out of the total in 2010 and declined steadily in 2012. After 2012, the figures rose dramatically till the end of the period where it recorded 2 million tourists which was relatively higher than the people who lived on the island. The visitors who stayed on the island stood at around 1million in 2010 and rose considerably till 2016 where it experienced a slight fall and increased again till 2017 with an account of 1. 5 million people. The total number of visitors stood at one million and increased steadily till 2017 where it reached a figure of 3. 5 million.
The graph illustrates the number of tourists
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visited a Caribbean island from 2010 to 2017.

Overall
, it is noticeable that the total number of tourists
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who
visited the Caribbean island increased over the period of time, those
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lived
on the
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crusie
ships
in particular
surpassed those
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resided on the island.

In 2010, the visitors
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on the cruse ships stood at 0. 3
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out of the total in 2010 and declined
steadily
in 2012. After 2012, the figures rose
dramatically
till the
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end
of the period where it recorded 2
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million
tourists which was
relatively
higher than the
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people
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who
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lived
on the island.

The visitors
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stayed on the island stood at around
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1million
in 2010 and rose
considerably
till 2016 where it experienced a slight fall and increased again till 2017 with an account of 1. 5
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million
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people
. The total number of visitors stood at one
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million
and increased
steadily
till 2017 where it reached a figure of 3. 5
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million
.
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