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the tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European Countries

A glance at the two tables provided reveals a number of clear differences between the five countries, which are UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden, in terms of the sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004. Units are measured in euros. One particular interesting fact highlighted by the table is that, when compared to 1999, all these countries bought more Fairtrade-labelled coffee in 2004. However, regarding to banana, most country share the same growing trend except for Sweden and Denmark. From the information supplied, it is evident that Switzerland has the most sales (3 millions) in coffee in 1999, which is around triple from Sweden, the least (0. 8 millions). In stark contrast, though in 2004, the UK took the lead of Fairtrade-labelled coffee consumption for 20 millions, in contrast to Sweden merely 1 million. With regard to the Banana, the Switzerland consumed the most for 15 million in 1999 and 47 million in 2004 respectively. Similarly, both the UK and Belgium share the same growing trend for almost around four to times from the sales in 1999 (1 million and 0. 6 million respectively). Conversely, the sales in Sweden and Denmark had the opposite current, within only 1 to 2 million.
A glance at the two tables provided reveals a number of
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differences between the five countries, which are UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden, in terms of the
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sales
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Fairtrade-labelled
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coffee
and bananas in 1999 and 2004. Units
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bought
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Fairtrade-labelled
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banana, most country share the same growing trend
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(3
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in
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in 1999, which is around triple from Sweden, the least (0. 8
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. In stark contrast, though in 2004, the UK took the lead of
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consumption for 20
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,
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in 1999 and 47
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in 2004
respectively
.
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in 1999 (1
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and 0. 6
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respectively
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in Sweden and Denmark had the opposite
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IELTS academic the tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European Countries

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