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the charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

A glance at the two bar charts provided reveals, except from full-time occupation, the two groups of students - graduate and postgraduate – did after graduating in the UK in 2008. One particular interesting fact highlighted by these figures is that both the number of graduates dedicated to further study is far outweigh the others, especially, for voluntary work, which has the least number. From the information supplied, it was evident that there were 29, 665 students who chose to go on Master program, which was the highest constitution among the others. Followed are part-time work and unemployment, which has 17735 and 16235 respectively. In stark contrast, however, the least is the voluntary work, with merely 3500 students. With regard to postgraduates, most students chose to have further study or part-time work, with 2725 and 2535 respectively, which was almost doubled that of unemployment. Conversely, the voluntary work has the least students with solely 345.
A glance at the two bar charts provided reveals, except from full-time occupation, the two groups of
students
-
graduate and postgraduate
did after graduating in the UK in 2008.

One particular interesting fact highlighted by these figures is that both the number of graduates dedicated to
further
study is far outweigh the others,
especially
, for voluntary
work
, which has the least number.

From the information supplied, it was evident that there were 29, 665
students
who chose to go on Master program, which was the highest constitution among the others. Followed are part-time
work
and unemployment, which has 17735 and 16235
respectively
. In stark contrast,
however
, the least is the voluntary
work
, with
merely
3500 students.

With regard to postgraduates, most
students
chose to have
further
study or part-time
work
, with 2725 and 2535
respectively
, which was almost doubled that of unemployment.
Conversely
, the voluntary
work
has the least
students
with
solely
345.
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IELTS academic the charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008

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