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The chart below gives information about trends in Internet use by the USA in two years.

The combination graph illustrate the usage of internet by a percentage of the USA’s female of various age group between the year 2000 and 2001. Overall, it clearly indicates that internet is more popular in younger generation than older one in both years. Young girls in 2000 and young adults in year 2021 spent the most of their time browsing internet which is over a 90 per cent and 100 per cent respectively. In 2000, there was a steady downward trend from over a 90 percent to only 20 per cent as the age group increases. In 2021, 90 percent of 12-15 years old girls used the net and its number increased by 10% in 16-18 age group. After that, there was a 20 per cent fall in 19-24 year old population, which was same as in 2000. The graph remain steady from 19- 35 age group at 80 per cent. Then in later years it experiences slight increment but it gradually goes down to 30% at people above 65 years old.

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