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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The given tables present the data about the sales of coffee and banana with labeled of fairtrade in the European nation during two the difference year 1999 and 2004. Overall it is clearly seen that the consumption of coffee is increase as compare to bananas. In 1999, in swirtzerland consumption of coffee had most demanded as releated too in other countries with 3 million euros. whereas in sweden is least amount of coffee sold out which is only 0. 8 euros and this same pattern had be seen in consumption of bannan by Sweden people and its around 1 euros. on the other hand british people had consumed a lot amount of coffee The sales of banana in 1999 and2004 had most demanded in Switzerland by 15 euros and it become three time double in 2004 with 47 euros But in Belgium people buy only 0. 6 million euros of banana. in denmark least amount of consumption of banana approx 0. 9.
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and banana with labeled of
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fairtrade
in the European nation during two the difference year 1999 and 2004.
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that the
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consumption
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coffee
is increase as compare to bananas.

In 1999, in
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swirtzerland
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consumption
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had most demanded as
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too in other countries with 3 million euros.
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whereas
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sweden
is
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sold out which is
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0. 8 euros and this same pattern had be
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seen
in
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consumption
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bannan
by Sweden
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people
and its around 1 euros.
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on
the other hand
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british
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people
had consumed a lot amount of
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coffee


The sales of banana in 1999 and2004 had most demanded in Switzerland by 15 euros and it
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three time double in 2004 with 47 euros
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in Belgium
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people
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0. 6 million euros of banana.
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in
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denmark
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amount of
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of banana approx 0. 9.

IELTS academic The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

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