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: the bar graph gives information about the growth of the world wealth in the period 2006-2015. Moreover, it projects the expected growth of world wealth in the period 2016-2025. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The data on the bar graph shows the average growth of world wealth from 2006 until 2015 in Asia, Europe, North America, Africa, and finally in the world in total. In addition, for the period 2016 – 2025 the expected growth for these continents has been calculated and presented in the graph. The information given show that Asia and Africa had the greatest grow of wealth compared to the rest of the continents. Specifically, the average wealth in Asia has increased by 9%, whereas in Africa it has improved by 7%. Europe experienced a growth 33% less than the size of the growth in Asia, while in North America the wealth grow reported was even smaller. On first glance, it is clear that the future projections are optimistic for all the continents, especially for Africa and Asia. It is important to mention that the prediction for North America indicates a growth half the size of the one for Asia. Meanwhile, Europe is expected to show 9% growth, which means that the average wealth will rise by half compared to the period 2006 – 2015, but Africa is likely to double the average wealth.
The data on the bar graph
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from 2006 until 2015 in Asia, Europe, North America, Africa, and
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in the world in total.
In addition
, for the period 2016 – 2025 the
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for these continents has
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The information
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that Asia and Africa had the greatest grow of
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compared to the rest of the continents.
Specifically
, the
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in Asia has increased by 9%, whereas in Africa it has
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by 7%. Europe experienced a
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33% less than the size of the
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in Asia, while in North America the
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grow reported was even smaller.

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that the future projections are optimistic for all the continents,
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for Africa and Asia. It is
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to mention that the prediction for North America indicates a
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half the size of the one for Asia. Meanwhile, Europe is
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to
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9%
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, which means that the
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will rise by half compared to the period 2006 – 2015,
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Africa is likely to double the
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IELTS academic : the bar graph gives information about the growth of the world wealth in the period 2006-2015. Moreover, it projects the expected growth of world wealth in the period 2016-2025.

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