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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The given graph represents the number of people production corbon dioxide in United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007. Overall, it can ve seen that United Kingdom showed a upword trend in carbon dioxide emissions compared to others countries. Amore detailed look at the graph illustrates that Portugal increased dramatically between 1967 and 1997. Interestingly, United Kingdom daminated much more than others. And United Kingdom started to decline sharply in 1977. But it did not lost their balance among Sweden, Italy and Portugal. Moreover, in 1977 Sweden neared marginally to United Kingdom, accounting for approximately 12. However, this was a gradual decrease from 1977 to 1987. And Italy experienced to go up slightly this situation
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Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
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trend in carbon dioxide emissions compared to others countries.
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detailed look at the graph illustrates that Portugal increased
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their balance among Sweden, Italy and Portugal.
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Kingdom, accounting for approximately 12.
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, this was a gradual decrease from 1977 to 1987. And Italy experienced to go up
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IELTS academic The graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

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