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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 2004 and 1999 in five European countries.

The given tables depict the information about sales of coffee and banana with labelled of fairtrade in 1999 and 2004 in European nation. Overall, it is clearly seen that consumption of coffee increased whereas in Sweden and Denmark people consumed least amount of coffee and banana as compare to other states In 1999, switdish spending most of their money to buy coffee with figure of 3 million euros, butin Sweden only 0. 8 million euros coffee had sold out. thereafter in 2004 in united kingdom the highest amount of coffee consumed by 20 million euros. although in Sweden people purchase least quantity of coffee which was only 1 million euros. On the other hand, in 1999 large amount of money spend by switexdish on banana which is 15 million euros thereafter in 2004 it get three time of 47 To conclude sales of banana in UK, beligum, Sweden is increased with few ratio but the are two countries who eat less amount of banana Sweden and Denmark respectively
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IELTS academic The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 2004 and 1999 in five European countries.

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