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The tables and pie chart illustrate and give information about brand new shopping centre in Auckland, New Zealand

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The tables and pie chart illustrate and give information about brand new shopping centre in Auckland, New Zealand. Information divided into 3 parts (shops, Restaurants, Design), units are given as percentage. Overall, majority of people satisfied with the qualification survey which is about shops, restaurants and design of mall, and also when it comes to shops women are much more happy respect to men, on the contrary situation differs on restaurants. In terms of shops and restaurants, 17% percent of males very satisfied and 45% satisfied with current state, other 38% percent dissatisfied and made no comment, furhermore females much more satisfied respect to men, ratios respectively 34% very satisfied, 37% satisfied and 20% made no comment. Moreover, restaurants are higly recommended from males and great part of men liked it, in addtion a quarter of men very satisfied and 55% satisfied, but women’s dissatisfed ratio higher than men. On the other hand, great majority of people loved the design of shopping mall also 10% with it dissatisfied, whereas totally 28% satisfied with current situation.
The tables and pie chart illustrate and give information about
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brand new
shopping
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centre
in Auckland, New Zealand. Information divided into 3 parts
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(shops
,
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Restaurants
, Design), units are
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given
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Overall
,
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majority of
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people
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satisfied
with the qualification survey which is about
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shops
,
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restaurants
and design of mall, and
also
when it
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comes
to
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shops
women are much more happy respect to
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men
,
on the contrary
situation differs on restaurants.

In terms of
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shops
and
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restaurants
, 17% percent of males
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very
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satisfied
and 45%
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satisfied
with
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current
state, other 38% percent dissatisfied and made no comment,
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furhermore
females much more
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satisfied
respect to
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men
, ratios
respectively
34%
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very
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satisfied
, 37%
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satisfied
and 20% made no comment.
Moreover
,
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restaurants
are
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higly
recommended from males and great part of
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men
liked it, in
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addtion
a quarter of
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men
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very
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satisfied
and 55%
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satisfied
,
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but
women’s
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dissatisfed
ratio higher than
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men
.

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,
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great majority of
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people
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loved
the design of shopping mall
also
10% with it dissatisfied, whereas
totally
28%
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satisfied
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current
situation.
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IELTS academic The tables and pie chart illustrate and give information about brand new shopping centre in Auckland, New Zealand

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  American English
4 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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