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The two given maps provide information about the organisation of Langley town over forty years from 1910 to 1950.

The two given maps provide information about the organisation of Langley town over forty years from 1910 to 1950. YB2Ym

The two given maps provide information about the organisation of Langley town over forty years from 1910 to 1950. Overall, it is clear that the town developed significantly from an industrial place with factory and wastelands to a well-organized city with the newest houses and entertainment area and great organized facilities. In 1910, the town had two main roads with Townhouses on both sides. To the right of Jordan Street and above the houses of Sherman Street, there was the location of a factory with a first wasteland to the right. On the one side of the named road, below the waste location, there was a store and a laundry, the cafe located on the opposite side of the road. Directly under it and the half of Sherman Street's houses, Railway workers’ cottages were at the right down corner of the map with the second space for waste. After 40 years, Langley city had been changed significantly, with new buildings. Jordan and Sherman Streets had been reminded at the same places, but New Lane road had appeared paralleling Jordan Street and crossing Sherman Street. Townhouses on the left side of the Jordan had been supplanted by Flats, other living places, also as wastelands and factories had been demolished. On the upper side of Sherman Street, Sherman Mansions had been built, while on the other side of the street had been created Sherman Park with a children’s play area. Other facilities had been replaced to the right side of the New Lane with two additional stores.

The two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 maps provide information about the Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
 of Langley town over forty years from 1910 to 1950.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the town developed significantly
 from an industrial place with factory and wastelands to a well-organized city with the newest This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 and entertainment area and great organized facilities.

In 1910, the town had two main You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
roads
 with Townhouses on both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsectorbottomtopsurfacehandpart
sides
. To the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 of Jordan You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
Street
 and above the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 of Sherman You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
Street
, there was the location of a factory with a first
 wasteland to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
. On the one side of the named You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
, below the waste location, there was a store and a laundry, the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 located on the opposite side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
. Directly
 under it and the half of Sherman Street's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
, Railway workers’ cottages were at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 down corner of the map with the second space for waste.

After 40 years, Langley city had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
significantly
, with new buildings. Jordan and Sherman You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
Streets
 had been reminded
 at the same places, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 New Lane You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 had appeared paralleling Jordan You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
Street
 and crossing Sherman You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
Street
. Townhouses on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the Jordan had been supplanted
 by Flats, other living places, also
 as wastelands and factories had been demolished
. On the upper side of Sherman You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
Street
, Sherman Mansions had been built
, while on the other side of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardcourtthoroughfaretrack
street
 had been created
 Sherman Park with a children’s play area. Other facilities had been replaced
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgoodlegalhonestappropriatelegitimateproper
right
 side of the New Lane with two additional stores. 