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The information on the donations made by the British people is represented in the barre graph above. In this report, I will present the main information and compare some features provided by the graph. In this graph we can see that in the year 1990, 42% of the British people between 36 and 50 years old donated money to charity. Almost a quarter of 26 to 35 years old British people, in the year 2010, gave money to charity. Overall, we can see from the graph that the age range that most donated money to charity in 1990 was between 36 and 50, whereas 20 year later, the range between 51 and 65 was the group that most gave money to charity. In conclusion, in both years, 1990 and 2010, the highest percentage of British people that donated money to charity was between the age range of 35 and 65 years old, where in 1990 the highest was during the first 15 years of this period of time and in 2010 the highest was during the last 15 years of this period of time.

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