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The bar graph is about British people by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 giving money to charity. The graph is divided into 5 bars per year.

The bar graph is about British people by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 giving money to charity. The graph is divided into 5 bars per year. yPNqE

The bar graph is about British people by age range for the years 1990 and 2010 giving money to charity. The graph is divided into 5 bars per year. The year and age that reached the peak of money given was people from 36 to 50 years old in 1990. From the years 18 to 50, we saw a steady growth in the charity for both years. The age range of 51 to 65 is the second place with the most money given. From the age range of 18 to 50, the year 1990 was at the top, but from the age range 51 to 65 and more, it started decreasing, leaving the year 2010 at the top. 2010 was the year that increased the most as the ages grew, since it got up 32 percent, and the year 1990 increased 25 percent. So we can say that the year that increased the most was 2010, but the year 1990 was at the top of more given money for charity for a much longer time than 2010. From the age range of 65 and more, in both years the money given dropped sharply.

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 to charity. The graph is divided
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