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The table shows total revenue created by complementary medicine over three years. The two charts illustrate the number of hospitals offering complementary medicine over twenty five years with a further classification showing which kinds of medicine proved the most popular in 2012

The table shows total revenue created by complementary medicine over three years. The two charts illustrate the number of hospitals offering complementary medicine over twenty five years with a further classification showing which kinds of medicine proved the most popular in 2012 aA7ao
The table illustrates the total revenue of US which was earned from complementary medicine from 2011 to 2016, whereas the line graph depicts the ratio of hospitals orovidingy complementary medicine between 1985 and 2015, however the bar diagram represents the percentage of most common complementary health approaches, based on nine different categories. Overall, it is apparent from the first chart that the earnings from complementary medicine experienced an upward trend. Meanwhile, the proportion I'd hospitals bestowing complementary medicine increased dramatically by the end of the year. To commerce with the table, at first glance, $11. 34 billion had generated by selling complementary medicine in 2011 which inclined slowly over the next following next 5 years by 3%. Similarly, a little more than 0% of hospitals provided complementary medicine in the first year which grew steadily to just over 10% in 2000. And it rose steeply to 40% by 2010. Turning to the bar diagram, Natural products showed the largest proportion of complementary health approaches with roughly 18. 0%. Following this, more than 10. 0% of deep breathing was provided to the patients. Mediation accounted for 8. 0% which was more than massage, special diets, homepathy and guided imagery.
The table illustrates the total revenue of US which
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from
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complementary
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medicine
from 2011 to 2016, whereas the line graph depicts the ratio of hospitals
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complementary
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medicine
between 1985 and 2015,
however
the bar diagram represents the percentage of most common
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complementary
health approaches, based on nine
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different
categories.

Overall
, it is apparent from the
first
chart that the earnings from
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complementary
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medicine
experienced an upward trend. Meanwhile, the proportion I'd hospitals bestowing
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complementary
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medicine
increased
dramatically
by the
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end
of the year.

To commerce with the table, at
first
glance, $11. 34 billion had generated by selling
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complementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
medicine
in 2011 which inclined
slowly
over the
next
following
next
5 years by 3%.
Similarly
, a
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little
more than 0% of hospitals provided
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complementary
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
medicine
in the
first
year which grew
steadily
to
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just
over 10% in 2000. And it rose
steeply
to 40% by 2010.

Turning to the bar diagram, Natural products
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
showed
the largest proportion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
complementary
health approaches with roughly 18. 0%. Following this, more than 10. 0% of deep breathing
was provided
to the patients. Mediation accounted for 8. 0% which was more than massage, special diets,
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homepathy
and guided imagery.
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IELTS academic The table shows total revenue created by complementary medicine over three years. The two charts illustrate the number of hospitals offering complementary medicine over twenty five years with a further classification showing which kinds of medicine proved the most popular in 2012

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