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computer and the internet in the arab world

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The bar chart compares the computer owners and internet users in nine Arab countries. It is also noticeable that, while the data for internet users in UAE had the highest point, the number of people using computer and internet in Morocco remained relatively unchanged. Notably, the quantity of people using computers in Egypt reaching nearly 130 computers per 1000 inhabitants, which was equal with its data in Kwait. In the interim, the number of individuals using computer in UAE, at approximately 150 computers per 1000 inhabitaants, which was threefold higher than the statistic for computer owners in Lebanon. By contrast, the quantity of people using internet in UAE was highest, at roughly 350 users per 1000 inhabitants, compared to that of second highest in Kuwait (almost 100 users per 1000 inhabitants) and the third highest in Egypt and Lebanon (about 70 users per 1000 inhabitants). Less people used internet in Syrla, at just about 5 users per 1000 inhabitans, which was lowest in nine countries. Meanwhile, the figure for Jordan was higher than that of S. Arabla, at around 48 users per 1000 inhabitants. However, the data for Morocco was lower than the number of individuals using internet in Oman, ranging from 10 to 49 users per 1000 inhabitants. At the same time, there were remain static in the quantities of people using computers in Jordan and Oman, at about 48 computers per 1000 inhabitants. Significantly, the number of computer owners in S. Arabla standing at 51 computers per 1000 inhabitants, which was higher than those of Morocco and Syrla.
The bar chart compares the computer owners and internet
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users
in nine Arab countries. It is
also
noticeable that, while the data for internet
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users
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in UAE
had the highest point, the
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number
of
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people
using computer and internet in Morocco remained
relatively
unchanged.

Notably
, the quantity of
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people
using computers in Egypt reaching
nearly
130 computers per 1000
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inhabitants
, which was equal with its data in
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Kwait
. In the interim, the
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number
of individuals using computer
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in UAE
, at approximately 150 computers per 1000
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inhabitaants
, which was threefold higher than the statistic for computer owners in Lebanon. By contrast, the quantity of
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people
using internet
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in UAE
was highest, at roughly 350
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users
per 1000
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inhabitants
, compared to that of second highest in Kuwait (almost 100
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users
per 1000
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inhabitants)
and the third highest in Egypt and Lebanon (about 70
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users
per 1000 inhabitants).

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Less
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people
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used
internet in
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Syrla
, at
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about 5
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users
per 1000
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inhabitans
, which was lowest in nine countries. Meanwhile, the figure for Jordan was higher than that of S.
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Arabla
, at around 48
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users
per 1000
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inhabitants
.
However
, the data for Morocco was lower than the
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number
of individuals using internet in Oman, ranging from 10 to 49
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users
per 1000
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inhabitants
. At the same time, there were
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remain
static in the quantities of
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people
using computers in Jordan and Oman, at about 48 computers per 1000
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inhabitants
.
Significantly
, the
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number
of computer owners in S.
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Arabla
standing at 51 computers per 1000
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inhabitants
, which was higher than those of Morocco and
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Syrla
.
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