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Production Processes of Orange Juice

Production Processes of Orange Juice Lw3N3

The diagram illustrates how orange juice is made in factory. It is clear that there are a number of stages involved before the products are packaged. The first stage of the process occurs when the ripe oranges are harvested, which are then delivered to factory. After that, these oranges are graded before they are sorted. The next step is when the oranges are squeezed by machine to extract fresh juice. The step after this is water extraction where the water evaporates while orange juice is heated, which results in concentrated juice. As soon as the juice is cooled down by storing in refrigerator at cool temperature, it is able to be canned. At the next stage, the concentrated juice cans are delivered by waterway to another factory. Once the orange juice concentrate is reconstituted by adding water, the liquid is packed and the orange juice products are ready for sale to consumers.

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 stage of the process occurs when the ripe oranges are harvested
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before
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. The next
 step is when the oranges are squeezed
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juice
. The step after this is water extraction where the water evaporates while orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is heated
, which results in concentrated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
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juice
is cooled
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. At the next
 stage, the concentrated You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 cans are delivered
 by waterway to another factory.

Once the orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 concentrate is reconstituted
 by adding water, the liquid is packed
 and the orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 products are ready for sale to consumers. 