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The given charts shows percentage of student's reasons to persue the higher education and what people think about the cost of education should be shared.

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The given charts shows percentage of student's reasons to persue the higher education and what people think about the cost of education should be shared. Overall, It is clearly visible that, Majority of adults perfer the higher studies based on their interest in subject. Furthermore, The highest cost of education contribute to individual in each course. One of the prime reasons of adult study is either their interest in subject or to gain qualifications accounted as 40% and 38% respectively. There are other reasons that make students study further such as enjoy learning, to improve prospects of promotion and helpful for current job. Enjoy learning and promotion are 20% and helpful for current job is 22% according to survey. While to meet people and to able to change job are the least perfer reasons for study which is below 15%. Shared of individual is the highest in all contibution accounted for 40% cost of each course. Whereas, The porportion of employer should 30% percenatge and 25% should be share to taxpayer.
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