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The table shows total amount of fish which was imported in US (in terms of billions)

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The table shows total amount of fish which was imported in US (in terms of billions) during 1988, 1992, 2002. At another hand, pie chart merge three countries ( canda, china, others), which provided fishes to the us country. Overall, there are noticable trends in both cases; in pie chart, Canada was entitiled as main distributor at the begining, however it decreased over the periods, while other countries increased their supplies. On another hand, table shows almost double growth of value in every particular year. As per table, in1988, recorded value of fish imported was 6. 57 billion dollars, this amount was starting amount of spell, which later rose to more than 10 billion in 2000. Moving to graph, it is clear at first glane that Canda supplied severe number of fishes(60%)in 1988, which made canda a major importer for Usa. after this year, contries like china and other extravagated their sales in 1992. Within this year, China rose to 30 %. And other countries dramatically rose to 40 percent. At the end, percentage of canada consisted 28%, China 30% and other countries kept the percentage of 42%.
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total amount of fish which
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, china, others), which provided fishes to
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begining
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increased their supplies. On another hand, table
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almost double growth of value in every particular year. As per table, in1988, recorded value of fish imported was 6. 57 billion dollars, this amount was starting amount of spell, which later rose to more than 10 billion in 2000. Moving to graph, it is
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their sales in 1992. Within this year, China rose to 30 %. And
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dramatically
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consisted 28%, China 30% and
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the percentage of 42%.
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IELTS academic The table shows total amount of fish which was imported in US (in terms of billions)

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