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In 1840, Asia and Europe in total produced 90% of wheat, whereas the rest of the world produced only 10%. In Asia, the production of wheat reduced to 30% in 1880 and 40 years later it again decreased to 20%. On the other hand, in Europe, wheat production increased gradually, which was 45% in 1880, and again increased by 5% in 1920. A similar trend also observed by the rest of the world. In 1960, while Europe with the rest of the world captured a total of 75% of the world's wheat production, Asia comprised only 25%. Finally, in 2000, Asia again gained the highest position by capturing 40% of the world's wheat production. On the contrary, Europe's wheat production declined to about 28%.
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, Asia comprised
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