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A piece of furniture in your home that you often use

A piece of furniture in your home that you often use PrjLX
Furniture is a part and parcel of every home there is a lot of a nature in my home also there at bad sofa set chairs tables covers and dressing tables but here I would like to talk about a piece of furniture that I use every day it is a study table I have this table in my room this is a special table my father got it made for me by a carpenter in my hometown the body of a table is made of pure wood the top is solid wood which has grey colour this is a bigger than a conventional study table it is a rectangular in shape it is very well designed there are shelves on the top of which I place my book there are lots on one side in which I keep my stationery material there is a chair which can be slide in the table when not it is used I find the stable very convenient please when I have study or work on my computer it I have a beautiful table lamp on a one side the right flight fall on my book on the table I just love this table I remember when I did not had this table my books were scattered all over my room but now there are in perfect order my whole room look neat and place because of this table so this is one of the most important thing in my room
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sofa set chairs
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tables
covers and dressing
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tables
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but
here I would like to talk about a piece of furniture that I
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use
every day it is a study
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table
I have this
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table
in my
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room
this is a special
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table
my father
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got
it made for me by a carpenter in my hometown the body of a
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table
is made
of pure wood the top is solid wood which has
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grey
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colour
this is a bigger than a conventional study
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table
it is a
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rectangular in shape
it is
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very
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well designed
there are shelves on the top of which I place my book there are lots on one side in which I
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keep
my stationery material there is a chair which can be
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slide
in the
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table
when not it is
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used
I find the stable
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very
convenient
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please
when I have study or work on my computer
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it
I have a
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beautiful
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table
lamp on a one side the right flight fall on my book on the
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table
I
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just
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love
this
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table
I remember when I did not
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this
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table
my books
were scattered
all over my
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room
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but
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now
there are in perfect order my whole
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room
look neat and place
because of this
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table
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so
this is one of the most
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important
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in my
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IELTS academic A piece of furniture in your home that you often use

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246 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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