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A piece of furniture in your home that you often use

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Furniture is a part and parcel of every home there is a lot of a nature in my home also there at bad sofa set chairs tables covers and dressing tables but here I would like to talk about a piece of furniture that I use every day it is a study table I have this table in my room this is a special table my father got it made for me by a carpenter in my hometown the body of a table is made of pure wood the top is solid wood which has grey colour this is a bigger than a conventional study table it is a rectangular in shape it is very well designed there are shelves on the top of which I place my book there are lots on one side in which I keep my stationery material there is a chair which can be slide in the table when not it is used I find the stable very convenient please when I have study or work on my computer it I have a beautiful table lamp on a one side the right flight fall on my book on the table I just love this table I remember when I did not had this table my books were scattered all over my room but now there are in perfect order my whole room look neat and place because of this table so this is one of the most important thing in my room
Furniture is a part and parcel of every home there is
a lot of
a nature in my home
also
there at
bad
sofa set chairs
tables
covers and dressing
tables
but
here I would like to talk about a piece of furniture that I
use
every day it is a study
table
I have this
table
in my
room
this is a special
table
my father
got
it made for me by a carpenter in my hometown the body of a
table
is made
of pure wood the top is solid wood which has
grey
colour
this is a bigger than a conventional study
table
it is a
rectangular in shape
it is
very
well designed
there are shelves on the top of which I place my book there are lots on one side in which I
keep
my stationery material there is a chair which can be
slide
in the
table
when not it is
used
I find the stable
very
convenient
please
when I have study or work on my computer
it
I have a
beautiful
table
lamp on a one side the right flight fall on my book on the
table
I
just
love
this
table
I remember when I did not
had
this
table
my books
were scattered
all over my
room
but
now
there are in perfect order my whole
room
look neat and place
because of this
table
so
this is one of the most
important
thing
in my
room
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IELTS academic A piece of furniture in your home that you often use

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