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The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

The maps demonstrate that the change of access road’s layout to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, city road and hospital road stayed the same location although their connection structure with hospital and each other changed. Besides, the car park which for staff and the public was divided and transformed different shape. In terms of layout, the car park which was located in the south of the hospital in 2007 was separated two parts as public and staff. A new public car park which was connected with ring road was established the east of the hospital in 2010, while old park area stayed as staff park. When looking at the other changes, in 2007 bus stations arranged during both side of the hospital road, after refurbishment, the bus station was located the south west of the hospital. Additionally, city road and hospital road was connected a roundabout like the hospital and hospital road in 2010. Furthermore, a new bus station was integrated these roundabouts with two little different roads.
The maps demonstrate that the
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layout to the city
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hospital
in 2007 and 2010.

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, city
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road
and
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hospital
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road
stayed the same location although their connection structure with
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hospital
and each other
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changed
.
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, the car
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park
which for staff and the public
was divided
and transformed
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different
shape.

In terms of layout, the car
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park
which
was located
in the south of the
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hospital
in 2007
was separated
two parts as public and staff. A new public car
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park
which
was connected
with ring
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road
was established
the east of the
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hospital
in 2010, while
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old
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park
area stayed as staff park.

When looking at the other
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changes
, in 2007 bus stations arranged during both side of the
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hospital
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road
, after refurbishment, the bus station
was located
the
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south west
of the
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hospital
.
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, city
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road
and
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hospital
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road
was connected
a roundabout like the
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hospital
and
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hospital
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road
in 2010.
Furthermore
, a new bus station
was integrated
these roundabouts with two
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different
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roads
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IELTS academic The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

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